Can You be More Then That?

by Tara   Apr 5, 2007


If you hurt me
will you come back, wipe my tears
and if you break my heart,
will you come mend it, take away my fears

if you leave me all alone
will you come back, be with me
and if i become blind with love
will you come let me see

if i ever want to die
will you help me through my past.
and if i loose someone i love
will you make the pain not last

if you hate me
will you ever give me a second chance
and if you forgive me again
will we laugh together, share this dance

if i love you
would it be something to look at
and if you just want to be friends
Can you be more then that?

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Undoing

    Wow, this is currently my favourite poem ever! It completely applies to something that happened/is still happening. This is amazing. :)!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I loved the questionning tone in this poem. And it's a concept that i know a lot of people will relate to cos i'm sure everyone has asked at least ONE of those questions before.
    I know i have
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Heya, Thanks for commention on one of my poems much appreciated :) I really loved this poem its sweet and cute the only suggestion i make is that you capatilize each letter of each line it makes the format and structure look a lil neater :) other then that i really did enjoy reading this poem well done on a great effort ~mel

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