You're my Guiding Angel and Shining Star

by BitterSweet   Apr 6, 2007


This pain inside,
These silent tears,
I've kept them hidden,
For all these years.

This life I lead,
These things I do,
I've kept them hidden,
And no one knew.

Then you came along,
So different from the rest,
No more did I hide,
The worst or the best.

You accepted who I was,
Every last part of it,
And on top of that,
My world you lit.

Now I'm thanking you
And you know who you are,
You're my Guiding Angel
And Shining Star.

**To my Mattie - From your BitterSweet Girl**

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Sweet and loving poem. i wish i had someone to love =[. you're so lucky. this poem was excellent. i really do hope you keep on writing cause i would defiantly love to see more of your work. you have talent! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    Very good first poem it was excellent. It was well written and organized and had strong feeling put into it. You have a talent and keep it up, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ryan

    That was amazing and really heart felt i wish i could write like that, you're so good could you please comment my poem?
    All my Life. thanks

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