Blade

by LiveLoveTy   Apr 6, 2007


I live in fear of Everyone
I am no longer talking
Speaking the words I am meant to say
Telling the feelings deep inside
No longer

I am no longer trusting
Believing the lies
Living in the memories of the never there
No longer

The cuts are from the pain you caused
The pain from watching you walk away
The scars are the memories of what was fake
The unreal laughs and smiles we shared

I promised I wouldnt release my pain this way
Relasp
The tears come
Heart turns black
The blade goes until dull
Wrist turns red

Who knows?
One day the blade may turn directions
It may run verticle
This blade might finally end the suffering
Who knows?
Tonight might just be that night

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Greatly written poem. Wording is excellent and atmosphere is superb. I like the topic very much and the way you wrote this poem is incredible.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Emmah

    Thank you sweets.
    I love this poem. Written very nicely!

  • 16 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    Beautiful like a lake of black tears shining softly in the moonlight with a girl ( or guy) just standing on a lump of cold black rock praying that it would end quickly she starts to slice and dies and now the black waters a red in memory of her/him the lake would be the only one to miss her/him cause she was all alone and is now dead

  • 16 years ago

    by Lenny

    That poem is delicious.
    Deliciously dark, and yeah...no crits...I liked it.