United

by Gasttlee   Apr 7, 2007


What is unity?
Purity
for every community.

Peace lessens harm
growing as a farm.

We are similar
in ways unfamiliar.

Everyone has feelings
built as ceilings.

Our world is a connection
joined by collection.

This planet is ours
in our own powers.

We live hand-in-hand
on all of our land.

In other ways we are different
and that is significant.

We will not always agree,
but together we are free.

Divided we will die
all for a lie.

We unite
when we leave fright,
then all is right.

We’re in this together
no matter the weather.

We are always one
shining as the Sun
and together we get things done.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Fredy

    Your form of writing is so well recognized, is your signature writing and it makes the poems you write very unique, it's a solid poem and the message behind it is amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by MEGZ is wondering what to do about life

    Idk about this poem at first i didnt under stand it. i guess it had something to do with the wording but the more you read it the more sense it makes...idk if that is a bad thing though.... i like it more and more everytime.

  • 16 years ago

    by Benjamin AmbersCry

    Muy Excelente! Good Job

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    the usage of words were very powerful, so unique style..amazing poet!

    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Great poem, although a thought it was a little too straight forward, like your actually talking to someone, when it should rather show the deepness of poetry, nice work. Thanks for commenting on my poem.

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