Hurt

by April McLaren   Apr 7, 2007


I feel sad when i am with you
I feel upset when i am away from you
What frustrates me more is that you don't listen
I don't understand when you sit there
and say you love me when you deceive me
I feel mad when you say you love me
because in my heart i know that you don't
i feel helpless when you are not here
and when i am the only one trying
I feel hurt that you make me feel sad
I feel foolish that i allowed you into my heart
and use your words like darts
Most of all i feel rejected that i am not with you
and you are not with me

most of all i feel sad that we will never be

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  • 17 years ago

    by peace and love

    It is really good and elabroate u descrispition was awesome and u totally showeing the truth but it could of been longer!

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    Excellent job with this one hun

  • 17 years ago

    by April McLaren

    Thank you so very much and it was my pleasure

  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    Awesome job wonderfully written lots of good words were used to describe everything. and thx for the comment on my poems:)

    keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Wow you really fixed this poem up and made it much better. I liked how you shortened down the use of certain words and shortened down that line. I think you made a good effort in changing this poem. Well done april i enjoyed reading this alot more now =) ~mel

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