God Help Me(Published)

by Andrew   Apr 9, 2007


Someone get me out of here.
This living hell, this town I call home.
The days I was once happy.
They seem to be all gone.

I want out of this prison.
This town isn't the place for me.
I just want some closure.
A bright light only I can see.

I just want the happiness.
That I had when i felt loved.
Oh God just shed your light on me.
And send me an Angel from up above.

On the outside i may seem happy.
Yet I'm dying deep within.
I'm tired of all this stress.
I'm surrounded with so much sin.

So God please send me a heavenly Angel.
Every night ends with my cries.
Please God get me out of this place.
And send me that Angel, to wipe the tears from my eyes.

In these last few months...
My life has been filled with negativity.
I just gave up caring.
Even for the ones who still love me.

My life, I have already started changing.
Just days ago my heart was still filled with hate.
I think God is answering my prayers.
Please God help me while i still have faith.

Please rate my poem i would really appreciate it...thank you.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by Heidi Harover

    That was really good, also very sad. If I were a person that didn't like poetry and was forced to read it, I would still really like it. That's a great talent. Be happy, and keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This is really sad, i can empathise with life changing a lot in the past month though, mine has too. i liked this poem, my only criticism is that one bit (can't remember it but the stanza about being surrounded by sin) seemed a little force, apart from that i really enjoyed it, xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Marjan

    What is it that is hurting you Andrew? :(
    Is there anything we can do?

Read All Comments (3)

More Poems By Andrew