Judgement

by Corruption   Apr 9, 2007


The light in the north
always shining bright
till one awful day
the day of judgement

all the living will fie
all love will break
stone turns to air
and fire to water

the sky will land
and the ground will float
the core will become a shell
the atmosphere will be inside

angels will kill all
demons will be our saviors
but still judgement comes
and then light will be gone

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  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    This poem is very interesting I loved it Thanks for the comment on "Window peeker"

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a dark but still a good poem keenan, a few grammer mistakes, like capitalization and periods and commas but this is still a very good poem, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Perfection

    This was rather interesting.. but to me this is a dark poem...
    And you might wanna change saviour to saviours since u did use demons (plural)
    Other then that it was a good poem and a very interesting view on things

    take care and keep writing=D

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Huh, doom in the end, i like this poem but i believe how we die is our doom or light. Nice poem 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

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