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by LadyPearl   Apr 10, 2007


I use to draw pictures of tall skyscrapers reaching
to the sky, to the world, where I may never see
I use to dream of a pasture, filled with trees
With fruits beaming from the tallest branches

So to the sea or ocean as some may call it
With my old black bag and dollar or so
I set out to find the land of freedom
A land that many have called their home

On board a dozen other red faced families
and children running about like anyday
I heard of the high bones above the eye
While ours lay flat as if something was wrong

I heard of the beauty and calmness of the air
Though it seems the ocean matches that as well
And I begin to wonder what home was to me
Not something I heard, perhaps something I dreamed

And dreams tend to float toward the horizon
Unseen and unanswered even with a guide
I peer behind where the shadow of my past loomed
And I longed to return to my heritage home

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  • Overall this was a good poem. The flow was off a bit.
    Other than that it was good.
    Beautifful poem.

    Keep it up 5/5

    :Sarah:

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Ahh. Downvoters. Looks like you have some admirers. [They're only jealous, remember that.]

    This is very good. Heartfelt, warm, sweet . . . everything a beautiful poem needs. I loved the ending, very . . . erm, sorry, lacking words here.

    However, I must say it's not YOUR best, but of course, it is much better than most poems [=).] Um, the flow was off for me . . . but, maybe it's just me.

    Nonetheless, beautiful poem.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    I don't know what to say. It has promise. Although I agree it isn't a 1-3. I'd say that it is 4/5 because the flow was off, and the uncertain rhyme scheme seemed to take away from the read. However, it was a good write, and I did enjoy reading it.