Stolen Soul

by Mezmeryz   Apr 10, 2007


You told her things that would have made, any girls' heart melt
She told you how much you meant to her, she told you how she felt.
When you held her in your arms, said you would never let her go,
Your words affected her deeply, to an extent you would never know.

She only enclosed you in her heart, her mind, her life and soul,
And that is what you snatched from her; that is all you stole.
Took possession of her and her existence, leaving nothing behind,
So when you asked her to get over it, there was nothing left to find.

How did you move on so swift and tear down a life so easy?
She had never dreamt of this, that her love could be so greedy.
She eternally lost a part of her, left were memories to reminisce on,
She had nothing to keep hold of, not a shoulder to cry upon.

Know she's left, but no tears are shed, we know that she had tried,
But I will never forget that song, the last words before she died.
The song you once sang for her forever remains on her lips:
'I love you know, I'll love you forever, I hope our love never slips...'

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  • 16 years ago

    by bleeding limegrenn

    Wow havebnt read a poem like this but its good 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful poem..different yet soo well written
    It was like filled with beauty and emotions..

    Excellent write..the words were chosen well..

    Kp up the good job!
    5/5

    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    OMG!! i'm not sure if i read it before but its soOoOo gud! all the emotion jus pours out lol luvin dese lines -
    She only enclosed you in her heart, her mind, her life and soul,
    And that is what you snatched from her; that is all you stole
    - lve n miss ya hun! xmwahx

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Yup this is what happen to girls so wrong but so true. Boys are stupid lol (most of them before i get backlash lol)

    xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    I really like this poem too. A very differnt style than I'm used to reading but you made it work. "She only enclosed you in her heart, her mind, her life and soul" this was my favorite line so different and unique it stood out from the rest of them ever time I re-read this poem. The only thing that I would change would be the ending.. it was very unexpected (which is a good thing) but I think that putting the song ling kind of changed the meaning of the poem for me especially "a love that never slips". slips kind of threw me off.

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