Where I End and You Begin

Magnificent

How charming this piece is, Ms. Debbie! I was rendered speechless by the bravura vividness of this versatile composition of yours.
I'm encanted tremendously.
Love,
Debbie

Comment #3~
Wow! I don't even know what to say. I mean a lot of ppl have written poems about the changing seasons, whether it has to do with love or just nature, but this is the best one I've seen. Great, great job! And congrats on placing in the contest, sry it took so long to comment. Thanks for being so patient! :)
~Midnight Sun

I know my comment is late, but Congrats on winning the contest!! You deserved it!! This was a beautiful write. I loved the idea with the seasons and the stuff. Yeah, I dunno what I'm saying anymore, lol. Amazing poem. Never stop! 5/5

` Liz =]

Love blessed Spring caresses day
Slumber's shadows break away
My heart beats once, then once again
Where I end and you begin

this is so beautiful, loved it right from the first stanza till the last one, beuatiful poem indeed

all the best and take care