The bridge

by lost and incomplete   Apr 12, 2007


Not all of you can see
whats inside of me
you don't really care
no one cares if I'm not there

the sadness and depression
it makes me hurt and hurt
no one can make this feeling lessen
i lay down on frozen dirt

i take the knife unwillingly
and stash it in my pocket
say goodbye to my friend
and wish her life will be happy

late at night i take the knife
but then decide...the bridge is better
thinking should i of left a letter...??
i stand above the roar of traffic

thinking humorlessly
which car will make my dream come true??
i step into the air
carelessly

a brief spurt of pain
My life is over
NEVER to start again

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  • 18 years ago

    by TalkItOutInTheRain

    I love this poem, it's really deep, i have no idea why but it feels like i can relate to it- keep it up!!
    C xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    Thinking humorlessly
    which car will make my dream come true??
    i step into the air
    carelessly

    a brief spurt of pain
    My life is over
    NEVER to start again
    --------------------------
    I love these two stanzas there so deep,, The last one caught my eye the most because of the way you...well...I don't know why Its just deep and it can cut like a knife!! xx
    Love you Hope too see some more just tell me if you need me to comment any poems!!
    xx Love Roxy/Emily

  • 18 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    Crap poem but got my emotions under control...sorta

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