If you give you shall recieve

I can relate to most all if not all of your poems.. Once again, this poem is another work of art. You show passion through your words. Very powerful. The flow was dead on. And it really speaks to your readers, it keeps them interested as well. (WHen I say them, I mean me too) lol..anyhow, really though, I enjoy all of your poetry, so keep it up. Thanks for all the comments on mine, by the way.
-Ally

I can understand what you feel through your poems you didnt really have to say lol. I can understand your pain as family is most important in helping you stay alive to be blunt. I hope things are ok because one day you will become famous with peotry like this and then theyll be sorry when you a millioniarre lol welldone hunni keep it up and illkeep reading bcoz youll be on me favs lol xxx alex xxx

I like this one. The second stanza was rather ironic. It seems, as I noted, like you aren't happy in giving blessings to others. Other than that, you have my support on this one. It strikes a chord within me about a reverent person's code of life. Like mine, in particular. Quite ironic? =]
Well done. Thanks for sharing.

This poem really reminds me of my featured quote The Balance of The Heart, Soul & Mind" reflects the humanness of us all, and the Divine Redemption, which frees us from ourselves.

Well written. It makes one think. Good job. 5/5