I really like it. I can feel your sadness through this poem. I hope your life gets better.

cesar

Hun, this hit me hard.
I can relate to this one so much. My mom and I constantly fight nonstop & I'll never admit that it does hurt.
The flow was flawless & the vocabulary was great. =]
The first stanza was my favorite, a wonderful way to open up the poem. Keep writing! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

This is prettty good by my "standards", i can feel vivid emotions, and your vocabulary is on parr.
id say this is a 5/5.

This was a good poem, lots of emotion but on this line...

"I catch myself thinking about why I should hate you"

You should take off "about" and leave it I catch myself thinking why I should hate you, sounds much better.

And this one:

"and never why I should still cherish you."

I think you should fix it up a little because it doesnt quite go with the flow of the poem, dont have any suggestions, kinda confused at how to change it. But overall it was a great poem, like I said I sensed the emotion in it. Its a great piece, just fix the first stanza a bit (as of what I told you) and it'll be fine. 5/5

Adoration completely. i was quite captured by this one love. i was completely affixiated really. 5/5 love.

This poem is amazing because it speaks the truth so well. You could have the best relationship with somebody for the longest time, but one mistake will ruin everything you've worked for. I understand fully what you mean by never being able to remember the good times, because the bad ones just keep playing in your head over and over again. Amazing job on this poem 5/5 for sure

Aww I feel the same way to my mom.. and I cannot express my emotions too.. I can feel your sadness in the poem. overall its a great poem I gave it a 5 :) excuse my bad english btw! TC :)

Wow..You're a great writer, honestly.. Even though it didn't rhyme, it flowedVERY well.. That is not easy to do. Keep up the good work. =) 5/5
-Ally

Great job....I really enjoyed the story line and it draws you in....the only thing I was left wondering is why she wasnt around...it may be an unneeded detail but i was still eft wondering...would be a great Part 2...5/5

I don't, I am to scared. = I don't, I am too scared.

The last line was kind of sketchy, kind of broke the flow of the poem and made it less meaningful, but I think you touched on a slightly original subject. Good job, and i think you need to work on syllable per lines in your poems, just to work the flow.

Still, it was well written.

Good job.

5/5
~Stephen White

I loved this poem. I think you did an amazing job on this poem!!!!!!!!!! I think the flow was good for the most part. well done. 5/5

~Chelsea

Very emotional poem, i loved it and all its truths it had, mothers are supposed to be there for you and help you through things and are supposed to be the people you love the most, but when they hurt you thats not how it works at all, i know ive had it happen a few times, you can forgive and forget or you can hold a grudge it depends on who you are and the situation really, good poem 5/5

And never why I should still cherish you. = ? I don't get that line ?

I am to scared. = I am too scared.

The poem is okay, and I can most indefinitely relate to this poem. Another 4.0, because the poem didn't touch me even when i can to the utmost degree relate to it. You need to show how you are struggling emotionally, rather than just physically. But still, well written and proof of a great vocabulary. Good job.

4/5
~Stephen White

To start with, this poem correlates with one of the threads in my life. It is really an issue when someone--a special someone--misunderstood you, and it really gets into my nerves which led to a series of unfortunate events in my life. I, however, cannot thoroughly connect to it no matter how hard I tried. If I may suggest, perhaps applying a consistent line meter or a uniform syllable--say 8, 10, or 12+--in my humblest opinion, will augment this poem to a higher degree. Restructuring is considered necessary at this point.
A fine effort, nevertheless.

I like it.
It seems that you have a lot to say.
Although
The flow seems a bit rocky.
I don't know...
All in all
A four?

Even though this confession is of a personal nature I believe everyone can find something that they can relate to. Although I don’t think of my mother in this line, my favorite line is
“The thought of getting close to you scares me,
I assume I will once again get let down.”

You may want to recheck this line I don't, “I am to scared”. If you’re not too busy

Anyway I liked the way this poem made me think of relationships.

OH MY GOD...

this was the best poem i have read on this website. I cryed, yup i know soppy ass me cried for the first time whilst reading someone elses poem.

I think this succeeded in this goal and i will ensure that this goes up for nomination for best poem next week ill will attempt to get you publicity or more feedback as im crap at it lol wow xxx alex xxx

Omg that was really touching, full of such deep underlaying emtions, telling all about, the issues you and your mom have. I understand completly. I didn't ever really fight with my mom, but for a long time she wasn't in my life, due to some circumstances beyond our control. but I too used to pretend that I didn't need her, when that was all I ever really wanted. the flow was a little off, but All poems do not have to rhyme, to be truly wonderful. Great read, and an even better write. 5/5

I loved it. The flow was great and the emotion was deep.
I can relate in some sense.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

Great! Good Flow.. Lots of emotion and i can completly relate to this!