The one I'm waiting for [Etheree]

by Infected with His Deadly Love   Apr 13, 2007


In
My dreams
You are there
The one for me
The one I will love
The one I am waiting for
But right now you are a dream
And I'll always keep waiting for you
Till the day you walk into my life
Until that day, my life is incomplete

Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables.

-For a contest.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, that one was really sweet, shows how much you really care about a person. Very beautifully written. You kept the scheme going. I've tried this one before, I didn't do a good job, so I never posted it! Good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Perfect example of a Etheree. You did an awesome job. I loved this poem and the meaning I got from reading it. Keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this!
    having attempted Etheree's in the past, I know how hard they can be, but you made it look effortless with this one.
    A wonderful write!

    P.S I commented I need you a while back, maybe you have another you'd like me to do?

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I liked it I just dont think the rhythm or anything as right and I know with the syllaols its hard but nice job anyways!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I love this format. I can never do a single one though.
    But this is fab!
    The concept you picked is something a lot of people can relate to. Waiting for the love of thier life to make an appearance..
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*