What Could It Be??

by MaSkEdSoUl   Apr 14, 2007


It comes in all sizes
It comes in all shapes
But most of all
It comes in all colors

What could this be?
You say
Its something juicy
Something tasty
Its something you'd call
Gum.

**I know its not all that, and its not good, but hey it was my first try. Hope you like it!!!**

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  • 18 years ago

    by Imani

    DAMN u had me thinking lolz
    but its just gum lolz

  • 18 years ago

    by Lori Lee

    I liked it. lol. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Cute read. Flow was a little off, but nicely written. keep it up, you will only get betterin time.Good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Haha this is cute. up until you said it was gum, i wasnt sure what it was going to be about!

  • 18 years ago

    by Debbie

    'Twas a cute write. If I may suggest, maybe applying a specific metre and/or rhyme scheme will enhance the poem's flow? =]
    An adorable poem it is, nevertheless.
    Thanks for sharing.

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