Plea For Purification... [Monorhyme]

by Debbie   Apr 15, 2007


Sonorous is Sound singing a melody,
Hoping to consume this spirit's agony.
May Sanity linger in the mind for eternity,
With Divine Essence's promise of immortality.
Hearken this plea, Father, I entreat Thee!
As Music soothes her soul's scornful vanity,
She screams, it seems, with bent knees,
Letting Light quench mine morbid malady.

© 2007 by Debbie de Lara

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fsams

    Great I can see how hard you have tried to make the poem monorhymic and 99 % you have succeeded. Well written and its really enjoyable to reat. Tc thanks for sharing

    With love
    Fsams

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    Bloody brilliant!
    I don't have the guts to try a monorhyme yet! lol
    You pull it off so beautifully, your language is always amazing.
    Plus, melody is one of my fave words, =)
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    Debbie
    You do such an amazing job on the formed poetry. Something I have never tried. Rhyme and flow are great.

    Excellent job!
    take Care Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by April McLaren

    Great flow it looks professional

  • 18 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow great descpition i loved it 5/5

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