My Brick Wall (Part 3)

by Ike Dizzle   Apr 16, 2007


So you think you got me
But I know you don't
You just trigger a trap
And escape? You wont

My rope has caught you
My brick wall didn't do the trick
You keep breaking in
And it was making me sick

So I built two
To lure you in this snare
Now I can show you
Why life isn't fair

As you hang there
And I pull out my gun
You think your life is over
You know its done

One thing though
I'm not like you
I dont hurt people
I help them through

But one thing I learned
When I was about to fall
I keep you and my friends out
With my brick wall

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  • 16 years ago

    by beautiful xx disaster

    This is really really amazing.
    Keep it up youre good.
    <3jess

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Very different piece. good rhyming...unusually written with the way you worded it and the thoughts behind it. Good job!
    Charisma*
    P.S. thanks for your comment!

  • 16 years ago

    by NoReasonToLive

    Great poem!! your poems are really good!! keep it up!! ya ya ya this is coming from a 13 year old but you know what i love this poem!! so ya keep it up! hope to see more on here!!
    -breann