Best friend?

by perfectlyBROKEN   Apr 17, 2007


You honestly believe i still care about you
When after i needed you
You just left me in the dark
To cry away my pain

You always said you were there for me
That you would never leave my side
The smile never left my face
when i felt i could put my trust in you

But it wasn't long
until the smile vanished,
vanished into thin air
I have never seen that smile again

I find it difficult to trust anyone
Let alone myself
If i had got shot in the heart
i reckon that would be less painful

betrayed is the simple word i feel
And yet you dont seem to care
Did our 7 years mean nothing to you
A best friend? i really dont think so

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  • 16 years ago

    by more den just a broken smile

    Great poem it really is great

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    Good poem ;] Nice how you put the things that happened on paper! xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by C Angel

    Wow powerful poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Stacey

    This is a really good poem
    i going through something exactly like this
    i have a hard time trusting people but when i do they always betray me
    i cant trust any of my friends, but i just learned to trust only myself
    good job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, truly written greatly.
    you put down many of my feelings that i have toward a so called friend now... you have done a great job expressing the reality of two friends and how it is nothing for one of them.
    your words tells me you are truly a great friend as i can feel your pain of this broken friendship and betrayel throughout the poem,
    dear, friendship is a big word and what i call this word is "HOLLY" word, cause it is, yet it is shamefull of how some people break the wall of trust with the name of friendship....
    great job once again, and i want to write a great quote by a famous author that says "if you betray me once, it is your guilt, but if you betray me twice, it is my fault" what he means it frienship can be re done but it is like a glass, once it breaks, it is not easy to fix..........

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