Dieing alone

by XsuicideXsexXscandalX   Apr 20, 2007


She sits there
all alone
her parents are out
alone with her knife
she thinks of the pain
that has come her way
and picks up the knife
and cuts away
as she lies there crying
her tears full of anger
she looks around
and relizes that
what she had done
was all wrong
but this pain wont go away
as she looks at herself
wondering if
her life was worth this
as she dies alone

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  • 16 years ago

    by Almost broken

    WOW this poem was truly great. it had so much feeling in it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent sad poem, it had a very good flow, and was well written. Thanks for coomenting on my poems, the more you do the more I will.

  • 17 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    I think that this is amazingly strongly written....Share this with the club hun, so many there can relate....I was once like this, but I am a living proof that some day it will all be better, trust me....And if you ever need to talk, feel free to email me okay hun =0)

    Love Sabrina

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This is really sad and the simple structure is very effective, i loved the lines:

    as she looks at herself
    wondering if
    her life was worth this

    they were pretty amazing, such strong meaning

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