by N J Thornton Apr 20, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
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This is actually chuckle funny to such as myself...good show.. |
by Kaila
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I'm quite confused about what it's about actually maybe you should a little thing on the bottom |
by barbara
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Wow thats really good!!! i like it...i like your writing style.... |
by Melpomene
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Loved the style of this poem it was different but unique at the same time. This poem kept my attention from start to finish it was short but i think you said alot in such a short piece of poetry. This was very good the emotion was strong and the flow great. Well done on a nicely penned poem you have written. Deserves a 5/5 in my eyes. Good work ~mel |
by Vanessa
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I think your style is really diffrent, from most poems on this site. Diffrent in a good way of course. THe flow was perfect and the emtion clear. You have done a very good job here. 5/5 |