I looked for you

by star   Apr 21, 2007


I looked for you in my books , in my thoughts
i felt that a part of me was lost
you were like the one who lost in my eyes
i used to see you ,but like a ghost

i shouted by your name
you didn't care of what i said
the universe answered by the same
it was the sound of my end

you were so hard with me
though we share many things

this wasn't what i wanted to be
i wish i was dead , because of this

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  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    Great to see another which is from the UAE..

    This is a powerful piece however ( just my opinion) it could've been powerful if there were punctuations at tge right place...Just the puctuation but nevertheless it dint change a thing still a great write..

    Keep writing..

  • 15 years ago

    by emo angel

    I love this poem!
    it like describes my life rite now!
    the end made me almost cry!
    good job!
    very powerful!

  • 17 years ago

    by skye

    This is a good poem.... keep it up... lve skye x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by Alma

    Loved it
    powerful and really deep
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this is really good. great job on it! you should try to make it longer tho. keep writing! 5/5

    ~Kristina

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