Sweet, Painfull, Idiotic Loneliness

by KeyxMashingxParody   Apr 21, 2007


Sweet vengeance running through my veins,
Shedding tears of laughter and pain.
I call a voice, yet nothing is heard!
Not a sentence, or a word!
Silence has driven me!

I cannot take another second of this!
The time I've lost in loneliness!

Idiotic love draining my heart dry,
Slipping aimless through dark skies.
I call a touch, yet nothing is felt!
Not a hand, or lips!
Numbness has killed me!

I cannot take another second of this!
The time I've lost in loneliness!

Painfull hate bursting through my chest,
Exploding from a night of no rest.
I call a heart, yet no love is found!
Not a crease, or vibration on the ground!
Depression has suffocated me!

I cannot take another second of this!
The time I've lost in loneliness!

Sweet vengeance running through my veins,
Shedding tears of laughter and pain.
I call a voice, yet nothing is heard!
Not a sentence, or a word!
Silence has driven me!

I cannot take another second of this!
The time I've lost in loneliness!

-Liz-
(I've been feeling really lonely lately, so it felt good to write a poem focused on it.)
~of life to live, I gave it all up~

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  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    We all feel lonely at times, and it's good that you can write how your feel, and you did a great job expressing your feelings. Although this poem did seem cliche, there were some unique lines in there at made the poem different. I really enjoyed this poem, and I am looking forward to reading some more of your poetry. I also enjoyed the rhyme scheme, I thought it was quite clever!.. Good job on this one :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Nil

    :) I enjoyed the wording on this poem it had excellent flow to it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    i love your poem,
    it flows nicely and the rhyming is great.
    i absolutely love the second stanza =) 5/5
    and i really enjoyed reading it.
    kisses stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    I loved the repetition.
    Really captured me.
    I think you over used "!" a bit much though.

    But I really enjoyed this poem.
    I loved the vocab used and how it flowed.
    It was really different.

    Well done :]]

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this is really good. i really like it a lot. it flowed so well. you did such an amazing job on writing it. wonderful job with it. 5/5

    ~Kristina

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