Reaching Out

by BrokenREALiTy   Apr 22, 2007


I'm trying so hard,
But I'm stuck in a corner.
Trying to escape,
And I can't move forward.

Crying out for a little help,
S.O.S: Please come and save me.
I can't find my way back,
I'm drowning in a black sea.

Give me back the world's color,
You're causing me to go blind.
Bring back the love we had,
Before I go out of my mind.

Slowly being pulled in,
The water's getting deep.
I'm losing all the memories,
That I've tried so hard to keep.

Will you say good bye again;
Kiss me another good night?
Or prove to me another way,
That what you did was right.

Show me the way you see things;
How our love wasn't fated.
Because currently, my heart,
Is simply sedated.

It doesn't see what you see,
Or think the way you think.
So how about explaining everything,
Before you let it sink?

Flooded with emotion,
This isn't where I want to be.
Dying in the ocean,
Reaching out for memories.
[c] 2O07 Mindy Huang

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  • 16 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    Once again .. you managed to make another really good poem.. you seriously have pure talent for poetry.. I hope you never stop writing them becasue I enjoyed every one of them.. good job once again.. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Excellent work dear!

    Flooded with emotion,
    This isn't where I want to be.
    Dying in the ocean,
    Reaching out for memories.
    ^^Beautiful lines....perefct!
    Great choice of words
    Kp writing!..loved it!
    5/5=)
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I enjoyed the imagery in this poem! I like the structure in this poem! well done! flow was good! keep it up! I really enjoyed reading this one! keep writing! 5/5! as always

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Very nice poem.. i really enjoyed reading it.. and it kept me interested the entire time... good job.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Zeus

    This was a really good poem and an enjoyable read. It was full of emotion and imagery. Nice job!