The so-called falling

by Marjan   Apr 23, 2007


Stricken by sadness,
alone I sat,
watched the seagulls fall
one by one
into the sea.
But the so-called falling
had just been a landing.
Too bad I missed the grace of it all.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    A quaint thought presently nicely...

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Breathtaking. How such sadness encumbers you from taking pleasure in life's comeliness is spectacularly dramatic and astonishing.

    An endearing piece.

    Take care,
    Marian

  • 16 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Nice poem. marjan.......everyone was finding you... nice work

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, marjan,
    so nice to see you again on P&Q
    it has been sometimes i have not noticed you around, i thought you may have left the site,lol.
    well as always i love to read your works and im adding you again to my favorite again, so i can be in touch with your words.
    this poem is so great as well,
    (khaely qashang hast)

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Wow! Beautiful! I loved the style... Fantastic work!

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