If Only I Could

I love it, very well written hope you write another one keep up the good work c".) 5/5

I know I've got nothing to say that someone hasn't aready told you, but I have to say it anyway- very inspiring and emotional piece. I love that by the end I was so happy the narrator was going to let him know everything. When you can pull me in like that I'm hooked.
Great work as usual!

This is so amazing. Very well written, and geez...i've fallen that hard for someone, and i wish he knew all that you wrote about. Very well written. You're incredibly talented.
5/5 <3

Aaaah first of all it was very romanting poem and a very lovely meesage you want to deliver your loves one.

second the words was so good. its just give the experience that how reader read the lines. with the perfect flowing of words. it was just a great work.

and one thing remain to say that i realy love the repition you have used in this poem. aaah your are such a great writer. i will must give you 5/5
take care

"If only I could" I would tell you how perfect is this poem. I lack in words to describ ehow wonderful your thoughts are. Great 5/5
Read my latest poem plse

With Love
Fsams