Until No More

by Bill Turner   Apr 24, 2007


What comes to be is what comes to me
Letting my thought guide my life
Forever giving and yet unforgiving
Feeling the energy of my life...
Flowing through me like a freight train
Positive thought is the fuel for my brain
I have watched too many crash and burn
The fast lane consuming them along the way...
There is no place I would rather run...
Taking the inside line hard and swift
Knowing that it can never last
Sooner or later the instincts go...
Caught in the flow...
I still believe...
Know in my heart I am the one...
Defying the odds and pushing the limits
I will live my life hammer down
Until I can live my life no more...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem bill, nice flow and wording was great, makes me think, but a great write good job, your friend Tracy 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Wow. I truly loved this poem. It was..amazing, and that doesn't even sum it up. I think this should be under inspirational, it brought a tear to my eye thinking about how I've lived my life in the past and knowing it's time to change, and this is really inspiring.

    "I have watched too many crash and burn
    The fast lane consuming them along the way..."

    ^^ Those lines were very captivating.

    5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bill
    I really loved this write of yours.

    Defying the odds and pushing the limits
    I will live my life hammer down
    Until I can live my life no more...

    These lines say it all.
    Take care your friend Cindy

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