The ending is very cliche'
But I sdtill LOVED it!
I like cliche' poems.
You wont find it hard to fit in here.
And I'm glad you've joined us :)
This poem was very smooth to read.
GREAT!

Very good, I think love is just that. now let everyonelse know! lol

Haha, yeah that is pretty much love in a nutshell. Good job on this poem, it's very true for the most part.

Again room for improvement but very lovley lol you still have great potential :D

xxx alex xxx

Aww. thats cute. short but sweet.. flow was great very good. keep up the good work!

I liked the repetition and ur word choice was excellent, showed how u felt and your emotions. great work.

The repetition was wonderful i loved this poem. Short sweet and awesome!!! great job 5/5

The fact that you used 1 Cor. 13 as your basis in writing this is quite charming. I really like that! Kudo's

Hey, again nice use of rhythm here ( i really gotta learn how to spell that word as i use it so much)
Love is YOU, you are a LOVEly chap by the sounds of it :-)
Well done! I could imagine this message as an inscription in a valentines day card.The world could share your vision.

Nice work ! x

Aww! It was really cute! Everyone has a different way of putting love into text, but you got the basics and I think that's what makes this poem really beautiful.

O believe if i had to tell someone what love is i'd lead them to this good poem. good job

your servant:
david

So me and my friends have been going back and fourth about what love is....u just covered it. great poem :)

Wow I couldnt agree more, this should almost go under the defination of love. Nice write.

Wow i love this poem! it's very good!

Very well written poem...
the flow is really good and the message is wonderful...
5/5
keep going
*isabel*

Excellent!

You have described your topic well..nicely done with ideas!

keep it up!

Beautiful
I love it
Keep it up!

Yeah that was all true! and i 100% agree this line

Love is patient, love will wait,

great thoughts and expressing about love.. . and i think its dedecated to everyone! love it 5/5

It's a pretty good poem. Although it seemed a bit forced. the repetition in this kind of killed it and I kind of lost interest. Maybe putting this into other ways that you can tell what love it. It's good though. 4/5

.:CiNdY:.

This is so true!! i wish i could send it to all my friends!! thanx for posting it!! :):)