I Wished for You

It is a good poem and it is very sweet. But there is one thing that I think should be changed, every sentence does not need to start with "I wish" it is just too repetitive. However this poem is still a 5/5

Aww so cutee
the repeat really worked for this one]
it was adorable
I totally fell in love
5/5

I found this piem short and sweet, i am very happy i randomly picked yuour account to read because this poem has made my day. xxxx

I'm sorry to have to (probably) repeat this cliche:

Short and sweet. I liked it.

Really good little poem, could possibly change the second line to better the rhythm but very very cute :)

Peace. Sole x

The simplicity and briefness of this poem give it a delightful Hallmark card flavor
Best wishes to you 5/5