I like your use of repetition.
Some of the words could ahve been better but I still enjoyed it GOOD job!

This poem may be very short but i still think its good. you have talent good job!

Short but great.
i think you have a great talent with words.
keep it up cause your poems are great.
a 5/5 from me.

This was a really sweet poem, but you didn't have to write 'I wished' in every line. Actually, I don't know, I guess it's alright. I think everything after that was the deeper part of the poem. Good stuff though.

Maybe not as good as your other poem but still just as sweet good job :D

xxx alex xxx

That was so cute.. lol good job!

It was short, but i still liked it, i think u could have used different words or worded it differently to make the flow just a little better, but overall, it was still a great poem. 5/5 keep it up

Short and sweet..wonderful loved it..great job 5/5

Great sweet poem. The flow was a little off though. 5/5

This was sweet.
Short and precise.
It seemed a bit forced in the ending
But still really, really sweet.
It seems like you knew exactly what to say.
I love it.
Anywayz,
5/5

It is indeed sweet.

I found this to be really sweet, it made me smile whilst reading it.
I liked the opening line, it pulled me into the poem.
Flow was good throughout, but I think this could have been a little longer.
I liked the ending, it was beautifully written.

This was really sweet. nice expression. keep up the good work. nice quick but meanigful love poem, and not too lovey-dovey

Short and sweet!
My only criticism would be that the penny upon the ground part didnt really fit perfectly.so would be worth thinking of alternatives maybe: I wished on a penny upon the ground? same words just a different way round seems to help the flow?

Nice work though x

Short, simple, and straight to the point. It was very lovely indeed! Good job.

Short and sweet, good job and keep up the good work.

your servant:
david

You might get this a lot but its true... short and sweet... it was quite refreshing... thanks for that... im glad i read it... it brings a smile to peoples facesü

~angel~

Reminds me of a poem i wrote in highschool. about wishes needing shooting stars. good write.

That was well good i thought!! made me think of the one i love!!

Sweet,short,cute.... sounds a little bit like a bunch of pick up lines put into a poem though... i still think it is good...

not as good as your other poems (all 5/5s of course), but i chose to comment this one because i think it is really good... but sounds a little bit corny....

but dont get me wrong i still think that it is amazing
<3jess