Fall into my arms

by Olorin   Apr 26, 2007


Forget what he said
Forget that he loved
He might be my friend
but your my true love

Look for the clues
I left them for you
I've waited for years
Please find my truth

I can see the glow
I can feel the beat
of an aching heart
just set it free

Fall into my arms
you sweet little thing
Fall into my arms
I'll surround you in peace

Inside I've hid
my feelings for you
doomed in hell
I'll suffer for you

I swore on my life
I'd look after your smile
I swore to the lord
That I'd never desire

You'll never know
That I love you
Because of the friend
That I refuse to condemn

Watching you both
It kills me inside
Yet its worth the pain
to see your delight

I can see the glow
I can feel the beat
of a happy girl
dancing past me

Fall into my arms
you sweet little thing
Fall into my arms
I'll surround you in peace

If I can't be yours
Then I want you to know
I'll always be here
waiting to help

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  • 17 years ago

    by LittleBlackRose

    Strong poem, you did a great job with it!

  • 17 years ago

    by ibelievedhim

    I like this alot! There's so much emotion you put into this. Good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Olorin

    Yeah that does sound alot better and its really what I was going for anyway lol I cant believe I didnt think of it I read it through soooo many tiems looking for small stuff like that lol.

    Thanks for the input :)

  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Its pretty good, had great flow. Except on one thing, its not very big:

    "doomed to hell"

    For some reason I think it should be doomed IN hell, I dont know, just my opinion lol. But anyways it was a great poem!!

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