Didn't let me go.

by Miu   Apr 28, 2007


I don't want to listen to lies,
there's enough in me that I'm trying to hide.
Drag me down with you,
Ill be smiling open wide,
Close enough but far away,
You took my everlasting days.
I don't see the stars shine, closed my eyes.
Left in rain, I'm screaming your name,
But you fade slowly away.
And in graveyard I walk with my empty hand,
Soul so cold.
I wish you didn't let me go!

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  • 16 years ago

    by ali

    Aww what emotion, soo sad...awesome stuff!
    5/5
    - ali xxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    It was such a heartacheing and sad poem take care 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Great poem, but there's one mistake in second line: theres should be there's.
    5/5,"I don't see the stars shine, closed my eyes
    Left in rain, I'm screaming your name" -really strong imagery, fantastic lines.

  • 16 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Another great poem. I really liked the flow in this one! Great job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is a nicely written poem, but so sad.
    i like the style you used
    you are really talented.keep it up
    a 5/5 from me because u really deserve it.

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