Bleeding mascara

by firexdancer   Apr 29, 2007


He screamed as she cried,
Told her she should have died.
Pieces falling to the floor,
As he slammed the breaking door.

Body torn and bruised,
Her one life had been misused.
You must have wings to fly,
How could she have believed each lie.

She ran out of the room,
Her happiness ended far too soon.
Tripping in the street,
The surface bloodying her bare feet.

She tried wishing on a star,
They said they could hear you wherever you are.
But dreams all disappear,
And then walks in the fear.

She lay there on her bed,
Voices pouring through her head.
hearing him call her Sara,
Eyes wide open, bleeding mascara.

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  • 16 years ago

    by JanaeNae

    Wow, dark, deep, depressing...well written!! i really liked it 5/5!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    And yes, I don't like title too much but great poem:]

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Interesting rhyming... I like it, you told good story and expressed the pain and all emotions which this poem holds superbly. Imagery is also good, it deserves 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Wow, this was my fav so far. It made me want to read more. I think this was outstanding and the words 'bleeding mascara' say it all.

    xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aww this is so sad! the emotions was raw and powerful! well penned poem! flow was alright for me! well done! and thanks for the comment ;)5/5!

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