Want to know?

by jason   Apr 29, 2007


If you want to know
why i died
look into your very own eyes

if you wish to know
how i lived
look through all of your sin

if you wish to see
why i would cry
take a look at the times that passed by

if you wish to know
the things i feared
just peer into my mirror with my tears

if you wish to know
anything more
then you will end up like me
buried under the floor

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alesia

    Although this was a short, simple poem. It spoke volumes! It was so very excellent! I can't find the words to type about how much I enjoyed this poem, amazing work, yet again.

    Alesia <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Hatori

    Great flow! The ending was quite creative, and, like in your other poems, I could really see everything that you were describing! Nothing to change, so I'll end it there. 5/5

    With all due respect,
    Hatori
    Thge Illusionist

  • 16 years ago

    by repair her heart

    WOAH....this poem was extremely deep. as i read it i had to think about every word written. good work!there is soooooo much meaning to this poem! kep it up! i love ur writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Great poem! It flowed so well and it had a great....rythm (not sure if thats the word Im looking for). I liked the feelings in it too. Great Job!

  • 16 years ago

    by the pale queen of the silent night

    Oh mygosh... this was the best poem i have ever read,,,,,,,,,its almost u speak what so many people feel..ur words are amazing..
    great job

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