Distant Friend

by Brittany C   Apr 30, 2007


Please don't leave me.
Don't you see that I
need someone to talk to?
But you wouldn't see that,
now would you distant friend.

I've known you for three years;
over the past two we've grown
more distant then ever before.
Yet I have always been here
for you no matter the price.

Distant friend of mine.
Where have you gone?
I can never seem to find you
but whenever you need me
you seem to find me right away.

Let's distant and I'll find someone
else to talk to because you don't care.
If you did I wouldn't have to say that
I need someone to talk to, you would
already know that something was wrong.

So I'll just write it down on paper
and let complete strangers know
how I feel deep down in side;
because you just don't seem to
care about me anyways, so I'll tell them

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  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This is sucha heartfelt poem. i really liked it. It made me think about friend i lost when i was younger. :( nice work hun

    xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Let's distant and I'll find someone
    else to talk to because you don't care.

    With the light of this line, I would say that you have nicely used descriptive grammar. Especially the word "distant" is apparent. I gave you 5/5 dear for this true piece of friendship.

  • 16 years ago

    by Chris

    Wow. i can really relate to this. me and my best friend of 7 years stopped talking about a year ago. but you know what, i realized it was for the better. i have a new best friend and she's amazing. don't know how i went all these years without her. the thing with friends... even when you find out one isn't really a friend, there's another there who will prove ot you how much their friendship means.

    take care!

  • 16 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    This was something that most people can relate to it.. but the poem was kind of awkward at the end .. it just probably me .. and at the beginning of the poem there was tons o fquestions.. but no questions mark.. and there was grammical errors.. no biggie.. but becasue of all your effort you put into this I GIVE you 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I liked it, there was such emotion for it, it was a nice read, 5/5

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