Captivated Hate

by Seronum   May 1, 2007


Borrow me with woven eyes
A heart so pure its tears run dry.
Together we part from reflected guilt.
This pain we share will never be built.
Silent as you are I am with you to the end.
Watch as we fall like statues in the wind.
I will always cherish you; a stitch at a time.
I will always remember you; no matter its prime.
Grant me your love and ill give you this soul.
Together we will live in this darkness we hold.

Hate, love, and fear are the three I am now.
You are the source to all that I vow.
Now and forever will the stitches be spread.
I will hunt you down with blood till you are struck dead.
Cold may my soul be and dead like my heart.
But you cannot forgive something so dark.

Betrayal, Deception, Lies!
Look before you fall,
the ground is the eyes.
Wide open they see;
the hate inside me.
Genuine like the moon
you'll die very soon.

Always reflect on me, never pass me by.
Like the calm before the storm theres a tear that starts to cry.
I am that tear, and am sick from the guilt.
Sick from all the torment you've given me.
Day by day the screams get so loud.
Like a light that wont go out, I'm punished within my shroud.

But revenge is sweet, and revenge you will eat.
As I tare into your flesh and beat you like meat.
I'll hang you from a rope and poke you with a stick.
And stitch your lips together, you'll not speak beyond the brick.

The sky has no turned red and blood is in the air.
The angels have lost their wings and hell has now been spared. From a tragedy so broken you'll never be woken to be set free from your soul until revenge has paid its toll.

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  • 16 years ago

    by mier

    Wow! A truly captivating poem... Beautifully written with such intense emotion and amazing description/imagination... The flow of words is nicely written.. Great work! Definitely 5/5 from me...

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was showed emotions and truth
    But i have something to advise if you let me,
    It would be better if you shorten the length of lines and length of poem,i mean to make it into parts cos it would make it easier to read
    Other than that so perfect..my faves should be those

    But revenge is sweet, and revenge you will eat.
    As I tare into your flesh and beat you like meat.
    I'll hang you from a rope and poke you with a stick.
    And stitch your lips together, you'll not speak beyond the brick.

    Keep it up hun
    Take care
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Alesia

    Smashing work! I could really feel the pain in this poem. It was just so emotive. At times it lost a little flow, but it picked right back up. I loved the way you worded this poem most of all. Beautifully penned. Amazing job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Chrissie

    Amazing poem hun. You use alot of detail and that makes it more deep. 5/5 on this one. Keep it up. Xx Chrissie