Broken In Two

Usually, I prefer poems that rhyme, but this one I really enjoyed. Love needs not to rhyme.
I can relate to this poem 100%

5/5

Wow this really is such a sad sad poem.
I love it!
I also liked the way of describing your love for this person, and your will to just simply not willing to love anyone else. This really shows how deep the love for this person is and i think that is such a beautiful thing.
Other then that I think this is a very strong poem and that it flows very well. Excellent choice of words too.

5/5

xo angelique

Wow this poem was really good. I loved it. the only critique that I have is "Brokenhearted I lay saddened," should be "Broken hearted I lay saddened," Broken hearted is two words not one. Although I liked this peice I find that the flow of this poem was a little off.

Wow dude,
this is another brillent poem by you.
you are so great and reading your poems takes me to a different world where i just want to continue reading it again and again.
beautifuly penned.
keep it up like always.

Poor thing...
I know exactly ho this feels..
It sucks and I don't know if there is a good way to handle it really.
I thought this poem was really good though and a lot of people will be able to relate to it nice job!