No more

by xo kisses xo   May 3, 2007


Things have changed
Knowing they were over
Nothing would be the same
she wants him back

No more hugs
No more kisses
No more love
IT'S OVER

pain is all she feels
she used to smile
now all she has are tears
crying, pain, and sadness
a broken heart that won't be fixed

No more smiles
No more fun
No more happiness
JUST PAIN

She cries
she misses him
Wishing things were different
Wishing things were okay
But they're not
Nothings okay

No more we
No more us
No more YOU

only...me...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    Wow.. =..( this one reallly reminds me of James...

  • 17 years ago

    by Mandy

    Awwww...i like this!! 5/5!! beautiful beautiful!!

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    "No more cute texts" ??? Kinda random m'dear... not that well put. Please emit.

    "broken heart" = "A broken heart that won't be fixed..."

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Noithing = Nothing

    ITS OVER = IT'S OVER

    crying, pain, and tears = crying and tears are pretty much the same thing. Find another noun or adjective.

    Nothings okay= Nothing's okay

    And as the last line, i suggest putting:

    "Only... Me..." It would create intimacy between the reader and the writer, making the poem that much better

    Overall, this poem could use some grammar work, but it is pretty good. Keep writing m'dear

    5/5
    ~Stephen White

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