Lol so i had to look up like every word in this poem :]P okay not really but the first line lol
anyways about the poem.. the first two lines are really strong.. i love the way you think of things. all your poems so far are much deeper than most people can bring themselves to think.. however.. i cant comment on the last line.. because wel i dont knoe french.. but it sound pretty lol :]P
Perfect dude, the reason im saying that this poem made me to go to dictionary to look up the meaning of your words, that is what poetry is about.
I also loved the french mixing, its just a fresh style to me........ something different.
as always, a 5/5 cause you truly deserve it.
Beautiful. You have such a rich vocabulary, and your poems reflect that. May I ask, though, the meaning of "Je suis desole"? Just curious...
Niccely done though. I have a hard time with haikus XD
I think of trees on this one.
I have no idea what you just said, though.
But I also see lovers.
Talking in french.
My conscious starts to fray...
Lovers falling in love
falling asleep as well.
I never noticed.
But people should talk about feelings more
In their comment
And less about flows, grammar, spelling, blah.
Thank you for opening my eyes on this one :]