Timeless Symphony

by awww   May 4, 2007


Eyes open, I'm still in bed
Recalling a dream of you
I wonder why I cant move on
When I have every reason to

All reasons have hurt me
Every single one cut so deep
So deep, I still have the scars
That remind me of my one leap

A leap of faith where I crashed
Cause I didnt think of landing
All that mattered was to jump
To you, my heart I was handing

Sadly, I had expected too much
Or maybe 'twas I expected at all
So now I've learnt my lesson
The very root of my downfall

Unfortunately, here I am again
With one last thought in mind
One more thing that I must say
As I hope all this you'll find

"I thought all had passed
All but a remaining irony:
my heart is broken...
yet it still sings a symphony"

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  • 16 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Yet anothing great piece. i can relate to this 1 a hell of alot lol.
    5*

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Nice work i love it

  • 16 years ago

    by oNice

    I really enjoyed the way it flowed and told a story!
    5/5 from me!

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    A leap of faith where I crashed
    Cause I didnt think of landing
    All that mattered was to jump
    To you, my heart I was handing

    LOVED that stanza. That is sooo easy to relate to. I think this piece had a few lines where it sounded like you were just trying to rhyme them, but overall, i really liked it and it reminds me of my own poetry. Good job!
    *ME*

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    A very touching story. Liked the poem very much, the rhymes and structure are perfect as usual. 5/5

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