Comments : Friendly Note

  • 12 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Awww.. that is way sweet.. she must mean a lot to you! i love it! keep up the awesome work! 5/5 =0)

  • 12 years ago

    by MyEscape

    Very pretty. i think some of your rhymes were forced, but it was a sweet piece, and I'm sure whoever this is for is very happy.
    *ME*

  • 12 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Awww, this is a very sweet poem. i have a friendship jus like this.. very well written and i can sence the love and caringness in it

  • 12 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Ok this is simple and a direct poem.. but honestly you hit me most especially in the last stanza.. dear it was sweet, the sweetest friendship i've ever read so far... by the way, the rhyming is a bit ok except in the third stanza 'coz i think you've tried hard on that one.. anyway, i still like this.

  • 12 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good, it had a nice flow with some strong emotions and I liked the ending, very satisfying. Overall a well done poem. Good job keep it up. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    I know you might be just a bit upset
    But you don't know where "here" is yet

    ^^^^This has got to be favorite line in this poem because i dont know why but it puts it all together for me...I really liked it, its really cute! 5/5

    Thanks for commenting mine its much appreciated!

  • 12 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This is sweet and written in a good way, truly interesting. It put the smile on my face and made me feel better.
    I like the flow of this piece and beautiful atmosphere that you created.
    5/5 from me

  • 12 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This was an excellent piece, very well written and the flow was great, It's nice to let friends know you care and if you can do it through writing then why not. Amazing job 5/5 GG23

  • I really really loved this poem. Makes me remember of my best friend Ericka. I like your rhyming.

    Keep up the good work!!!

    5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 12 years ago

    by Tammie

    This is such a sweet poem for your friend. I enjoyed it a lot, although some of the rhyming seemed a bit forced, overall it was very well written. It really shows your apprecitation for your friend, which is always good to see, i bet she was happy with this. I love this line;
    'I know you might be just a bit upset
    But you don't know where "here" is yet'
    So well written and something about it really gets to me, in a good way. 5/5

    Tammie

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a nice poem the flow was good and the meaning very heart felt you did well your friend should be proud Plot121

  • 12 years ago

    by Kaila

    Aww Very cute! I loved it!
    I hope she liked it a lot!
    Very nice rhyming
    and it didn't sound to cliche
    wonderful job 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Shinobi

    Liked this song very much. Reminds me of an old friendship I had. The rhymes and structure are great, keep it up 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Aww. im glad you made me read this. this was soo loving. Cat has got to be soo lucky.

  • 12 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    Aww, it's so sweet. Good at showing how you feel through words. I give it a 5/5.

  • 12 years ago

    by Melvin LeVeque

    Nice expression, keep it up!!

  • 11 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    A very good write. It was unique and very interesting. Your emotions were portrayed very well. And this was very nicely written. I really liked the ending. :] 5/5.

  • 11 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Very good. This is something that makes me think of my friends.
    "I'm in a dream of dreams that goes so high
    Passing the clouds, going beyond the sky"

    that REALLY stuck out to me. mainly because i am a dreamer. so that was great. I loved it
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Epicly sweet!!!
    5/5*

  • 10 years ago

    by ROSE

    Waahhahaha..nakaka touch naman!...i love it.=D..love your poems ..all of them!.
    dreamer rocks!..

    5/5