Ok this is simple and a direct poem.. but honestly you hit me most especially in the last stanza.. dear it was sweet, the sweetest friendship i've ever read so far... by the way, the rhyming is a bit ok except in the third stanza 'coz i think you've tried hard on that one.. anyway, i still like this.
This is such a sweet poem for your friend. I enjoyed it a lot, although some of the rhyming seemed a bit forced, overall it was very well written. It really shows your apprecitation for your friend, which is always good to see, i bet she was happy with this. I love this line;
'I know you might be just a bit upset
But you don't know where "here" is yet'
So well written and something about it really gets to me, in a good way. 5/5