Never Ending Dream

by Brittney Follett   May 5, 2007


Searching for the future.
I'm drowning in the past.
Thoughts of you and me.
Are flying by me fast.

Our relationship is
A Never Ending Dream.
On the surface it's fine.
But it's never as it seems.

Faking kisses and laughs,
So I can see you smile
But I am not so sure,
If I keep on this awhile.

I don't want to hurt you.
I don't want you mad.
I don't know what to do.
This is making me sad.

It's sad to know you love me
With every beat of your heart
But me not loving you back
Is really ripping us apart.

I mean I might love you,
It's just right now I'm not sure.
Everything's so confusing.
Your broken heart has no cure.

My heart is sown together,
I'm ripping at the seam.
But I can't seem to wake up
From this Never Ending Dream.
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  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel

    I love the way that it sort of tells a story and your feelings at the same time, and your emotions were very clear. sometimes it just makes a poem a whole lot better if you use better adjectives and verbs and such. it helps to pin point the emotions you are describing. but over all it was great. keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Anonymous

    Good stuff. Very good imagery. It's better to let him go than to lead him on, though.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ohhh I LOVE this!
    The opening dragged me in, and from there on it kept getting better and better. The last stanza, I found to be very intense and a perfect way to wrap up.
    The only suggestion I have for this is try to use less fillers, I kept seeing them in a lot of places.
    However, apart from that, I think you did a wonderful job with this!

  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    I like the perspective it was written in. its a very interesting poem, and i can really relate to it right this second. great write. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Awesome. Again I can feel the pain seeping out of this. The flow was excellent, and the word choice surperb. Keep up the excellent work. 5/5

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