Dream

by david hollas   May 6, 2007


Like its coming through a dream
Throwing pebbles in a stream
I just stood with my daughter Laura
Throwing pebbles in the water.

I never knew that i could find
Such tranquility of mind
Seeming to find such joy
In a simple childish ploy.

Long after i reach December
I hope that she will still remember
When that day as through a dream
We threw pebbles in a stream.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    "Seeming to find such joy ,
    in a simple childish ploy"
    Beautifully penned!....short but filled with meaning..very sweet writ!..kp up the good work!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I love short poems that say so much cy

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    A very touching memory,our time with our kids goes too fast, excellent write.

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Very beautiful poem. Makes warm inside and it must had been a very special moment for you. Keep up the great work :)

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    Seeming to find such joy ,
    in a simple childish ploy.

    This was a beautiful poem ,and the above words are somewhat true as when you see things throught the eye of a child life does seem so much more simple.Very well done ,you keep writing and I'll keep reading.take care.

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