The One That Got Away

Few words ... often convey more! And this write did. Nice job.

Amazing, you truly have a talent, excellent work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Awhh. I loved how you made the whole poem with just one rhyme. That was really unique. I think this was more dark than miscellaneous because some of the frazes were quite dark. I liked the simple effect of the poem as well. Overall, nicely done. 5/5

I liked the rhyme
It was cool
Not many people can rhyme one word for two stanzas
Great job!

Lol, that's a cool poem. You used only one sounding rhyme all along, and I don't see that a lot, which makes the poem unique. I liked it alot! plus it gives a nice message:)