Sarcastic Outcast

by The Pessimistic Peabody   May 8, 2007


Life as an outcast
Isn't really that bad
It just means no friends
and always being sad

Its laughter to your back
Dirty looks to your face
Feeling like your nothing
Just one big disgrace

For me to be wanted
I no longer wish to be
All those who are wanted
Aren't very cool to me

Like i said it doesn't hurt
I'm really used to it
To having people yell and say
I ain't worth an ounce of spit

It's been eight long years now
Since i could look in a face
Now my eyes stay on the ground
As if my body knows its place

"I want to be just like you sis"
comes from the mouth of a young boy
Of course that doesn't hurt me
Surely these are tears of joy

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow I really liked it at first it was really sad and it seemed like she was super depressed etc but in the end you find out that shes happy because of her little brother (or at least thats what I got out of it) Nice write. The ending was totally unexpected.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful ending..lol...and the poem flowed wel too.....differnt style though..but it had an amazing effect on the poem!..kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I really liked it, i mean the way she talks at the beginning she seems to heartless and cold but with the comment of tears of joy at the end we get to see a softer side

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    I can so much relate to this poem you have no clue. I loved the way you portayed everyone else then at the end portaried your loved one. That was the best part this is a great peice of work. Great Job take care Plot121...

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Again, amazing. you did another well done job. the emtions are dripping off of every word that is so very well chosen. The flow was of couse perfect, and the sturture flawless. Again 5/5

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