This poem is interesting, to say the least. Very intruguing, the line about Rosencrantz throws it off...causes you to think, which I like. Not many people are going to remember these characters from Hamlet, which is cool that you included references to these characters. Definitely 5/5 from me.
The poem is just great...very very beautiful..perfect...incredible..amazing..lol... what not!!...i love this 1....the word choice is just perfect and i really don't knw hw u can just so easily put in so much of power and beauty to a short poem...Amazing write!!
I pictured a half man with everyone staring at him.
Only with chimes all around.
I don't know what your other words meant.
From the picture I just described.
It was kind of freaky
A person that's different... half man-half machine
With everyone staring at him.
He feels awkward.
I don't know.
Sometimes I kind of feel like him.
I probably interpreted yours wrong :[
I love your beginning.
Although I didn't understand most of it.
15 years ago
by Courtney Lang
I loved this poem.
it was fabulous.
there was good flow and it made me want to keep reading it.
also, it seemed i was able to relate.
Now this, this piece was interesting. I love poetry that has to make me think and this poem does just that. It is not spelt right out infront of me so that from the first line I know exactly what is going on it keeps me interesting wanting to know whats going on. Vocab was stunning I must say I truely love the way you write. This poem was definitly not cliched it reminded me of being uncomfortable with myself for some reason. Overall well done a 5/5 from me. ~Mel
It is very interesting, I like the idea but I don't really understand what this poem means to you. Few lines are very effective and you wrote short piece but you still managed to create powerful atmosphere, with just a few words, that is really impressing. Anyway, I like it very much, words that you used are superbly picked. I enjoyed in every line, this piece has some special tone that makes it excellent. Well done!