For You

by nai   May 11, 2007


I tried hard for you
worked for you
got up each morning,
and who for?
well it was for you
i care for you
i love for you
im even writing this
for you
i laugh for you
i cry for you
might as well say
i live for you
and still you say i do nothing,
sometimes i wonder why i bother
then i realized, its for you

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  • 16 years ago

    by kolorful

    Hey i especially liked this one better than the others =] 6/5 lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Hatori

    Aww. This is a really nice poem! The ending was what made me truly like it, and it shows the truth. People will do anything for someone they care about. Just wondering, but did you get this idea for a poem by past experience? You don't have to answer, only if you want to. Well, keep it up, and 5/5 from the Illusionist.

    With all due respect,
    Hatori
    The Illusionist

    P.S. If you get a chance, can you comment and/or rate some of my poems as well?

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    This was really a nice write...
    i already felt that way...
    anyway
    your poem is really good...
    keep going
    *isabel*

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