The light of me

by Stephanie Naylor   May 12, 2007


As i walk down the path
of life

a great shadow looms
over me, cracking me and

holding me back,
my only love is a freedom

that i will never know
the freedom of my past

though, through all my pain
and bleeding torment

i see a light

a light so bright
it extinguishes the darkness

around me and freeing
of the weight holding me down

for that light is you
my one and only true love

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    It flowed well and was a good piece of writing. you have talent, and i look forward to reading more of your work
    xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    A nice piece. A few puncuation issues. Again with the none capitalized "I's" The broken lines through me off in some places but over all A good piece. ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Great flow, wonderful word choice, and strong emtion. that was awesome 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    This was awsome! i liked this. it flowed well. and full of emotion.. keep up the great work.. 5/5

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