Tired

by RachiBubbles   May 13, 2007


By, Rachael (my own work)

I'm tired

I'm weak

I'm nothing

but with you I'm everything.

I'm tired of you not listening

I'm weak from your harsh words

I'm nothing without you

i hope you know that too.

I'm sick of all the lies

it tangles my mind

you put me through so much

so now its hard to stay in touch

i can't stand your habits

they get worse everyday

you do them without knowing

so its hard to say.

i think about how i hate you

for the things you did

I'm so tired of being upset

so lets just talk it through.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very nicely written. I liked your rhymes and the flow. The structure lacked, perhaps breaking it into stanzas will help.

    "its" in the lines, "so now its hard to stay in touch" and "so its hard to say." should be, "it's" for you mean "it is"

    Peace, Joe