I Care About You.

by XxWorthlessxX   May 15, 2007


Her eyes sparkle as you walk by,
But you don't even notice her, you don't say hi.
You are the only one for her in her heart.
Even though your relationship has grown apart.
She wants you to be the one that is there to hold her hand,
Taking walks on the beach with her, laying in the sand.
Looking in each others eyes, saying how much you care,
But oh no, you do not dare.
She loves you so much, you do know that right?
You're the only one she thinks about before going to bed at night.
I will love you forever and ever will stay,
But one day you'll move on, which will not allow the pain to go away.
But as for now the time will have to end,
I will make sure you only think I want to be best friends.

Kackie.oxxo.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    I truly admired the sincerity of your compositions. It is something which always enchants me when it comes to reading poetry.

    Nice work.

    -Marian

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    A sweet poem which was nicely penned hold stong emotions and very vivid imagery. Enchanting. You pulled of a cliche topic really well im amazed. Good effort ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem is enhanced by the imagery in the middle followed by a sentiment of desire

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. The only problem was that the flow was a little off. Maybe if you were make the sentences about the same length that would help. Other then that It was a very nice poem. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, this was another great one by you, you seem to write right from your heart that s why they are so amazing, keep it up dear.
    another 5/5 from me.

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