You're the Voice Inside My Head {Ottava Rima}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   May 16, 2007


You're the voice inside my head [it's called regret],
You're the singing in my heart [it's called detest],
You're the reason my feet still walk; [they got wet],
You're the reason I couldn't sleep [I lost rest].
There's a new voice inside my head [so do not fret];
There's a new melody [that's for the best].
You are not the only voice inside my head,
For my love for you is mute and dead.
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A Ottava Rima is a poem written in 8-line octives. Each line is of a 10 or 11 syllable count in
the following rhyme:

one octive poem. abababcc

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Oh its my very first time to read this kind of poet so i think it has a great unique style! ilove the way u wirte and express ur words here. very well written and it maitain the great flow...so i must be give over all 5/5